Mangrove Forest
Mangrove is place of observation, but there is a place recreation and picnic for many people. The located mangrove forest in Wonorejo Surabaya.Usually in there very crowded because many people to visit in mangrove.and than in there we can ride a boat to go round or we can round only with walk by way of bridge which in around mangrove.Usually in there used as place to photograph prewedding. but in there it's very blazing hot, and then i am happy to visit mangrove foret in the afternoon.
The located mangrove forest in wonorejo Surabaya -> The located mangrove forest in Wonorejo Surabaya, name of location must use capital letters.
BalasHapusUps sorry indah
BalasHapusthanks for your attention
Usually in there very crowded = Usually atmosphere in there is very crowded
BalasHapusYou write "Mangrove is place of observation.but there is a place recreation and picnic for many people" I think better you write "Mangrove is place of observation, but there is a place recreation and picnic for many people."
BalasHapusthanks for your corret vivi
BalasHapusso i use compound sentence right :)
mangrove is place observation or picnic the truth ti' ? better you use " mangrove is place of observation but also place recreation and picnic "
BalasHapusI think, many people to visit in mangrove.and than in there = many people to visit in mangrove, and than in there
BalasHapusbut in there it's very blazing hot => But, in there it's very blazing hot . you less comma and capital letters in B
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